As you look back on a lost relationship
And some of the traits you hadn’t seen appear
Maybe it helps you to move on after all
When those things are pointed out very clear.

When you find the other was rather controlling
That they tried to almost blackmail you with thought
You see you are better off with the others you chose
And they weren’t worth the love for which you fought.

So now you can be who you wanted to be
Without fear that anyone will expect to much
It wasn’t that you didn’t think at the time
You just realize that you needed another’s touch.

You’re reading this and thinking that I’m better off
But there is something that you might not see
For this is not how I felt about another
It is what they felt when looking at me.


About graypoet

Just one that at times puts the words to the page and lets them fall as they might.
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2 Responses to Revelation

  1. nikky44 says:

    You have a lot to give. I have shared a quote today on Facebook. It says “If you’re giving your all and your all is not enough, you’re giving it to the wrong person.”
    You will find The right person soon ❤

  2. aionion says:

    Wow, that was awesome! I had to re-read it after I read the ending.

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